She just turned my life around,
When I finally found her;
Changing my entire being,
As well as my character.
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Highest time for thee Sir Bernard, to create loevlky end rhymes again. This is a WOW Poem dated 26 August 2015. Where have your beautiful words gone, my dear Sir? In the pupils or in the many numbers of submittances? Please, do not be annoyed, since your poems are true beautiful and Beauty is unpayable.
Yes, she took me up and high, When I was so low and down; ..................... This is what a true companion in life is supposed to do....! One who stays with us in times of trouble and strengthens us giving sweet confidence is the best partner! Definitely these sweet lines of verse will delight your loved one! A beautiful poem! A 10
She just turned my life around, When I finally found her; Changing my entire being, As well as my character. This is truly remarkable, sir Bernard.
This poem is so comforting to read, so uplifting to think about, as if flowers of Spring suddenly appear in thousands in otherwise a pair of dry eyes! 'She had filled the gap, As she turned my life around" - Lucky you! and lucky she as well, who could bring forth such a beautiful poem by loving a poet so wholeheartedly!
The sound of her voice Makes me reach my greatest goal. Pretty poem, dear Bernard......
Every time I see her, Inspires my heart and my soul; So sweet and lovely, dear Bernard....
She turned my life around, When I finally found her; Changing my whole being, As well as my character. I love these lines, dear Bernie...............................
That woman will surely be delighted, Bernard......................
Thank you so much, Dear Rajnish for the fine feedback. It means a lot to me๐๐๐
This poem can truly make a heart feel like a butterfly kiss. Wonderful!
The spontaneous flow of emotions expressed in the poem is excellent. True love is very powerful and can bring about great changes in the loved one.
Dear Ratnakar, thank you for the wonderful comment๐๐๐
Fascinatingly beautiful poetical portrait of love changing an entire being's attitude and character. Touching innocence within your poem, very lovely and tender. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
BUT to have 10858 POEMS, that's a myriad poems, Sir. Whatever, I always honour my younger Brother (YOU) since we have the same colour of choice (God) . Thank you for sharing this amazing poem. Most beautiful. I will read this time and again. God Bless You and your beloved family Amen. A well deserved 10+++++++++++++
Thanks, dear Sylvia for your wonderful words of love and inspiration ๐๐