She treads on autumn leaves
Sipping with eyes the autumn grief
Crispy rustles, yellowing hues
Once on the tree-tops all they grew
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Beautiful, but wait, summer still bloom and green and no leaves leaving before it green, as much no new life before past a time, our present, so do feel the moment you have...and dont let it melt for something yet it something to be missed heartfelt...liked your poem! the title so nice_Soul
imagery & nature seem to be under ur hold...hats off for u sis..10+++
Life in autumn in mellowing hues, autumn leaves under the feet and the dove singing above her autumn songs.! Amid all these she ambling away in queenly swirl! A beautiful and vivid picture! Indeed a beautiful poem Jasmeen! !
An awesome poem with a wry touch but d imagery is great poetic! Enjoyd many lines.
I know this feeling, I was lonely for many many years, but the more I learned about life and learned to love myself, find hobbies, things to do every second, I love myself, my time by myself and I tell you the truth I do not wish to have anybody to argue with, because after the great love happening people picks on each other no matter what.