Saturday, June 15, 2013

She Treads On Autumn Leaves Comments

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She treads on autumn leaves
Sipping with eyes the autumn grief
Crispy rustles, yellowing hues
Once on the tree-tops all they grew
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Yasmin Khan
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Lasoaphia Quxazs 18 June 2013

I know this feeling, I was lonely for many many years, but the more I learned about life and learned to love myself, find hobbies, things to do every second, I love myself, my time by myself and I tell you the truth I do not wish to have anybody to argue with, because after the great love happening people picks on each other no matter what.

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David Wood 17 June 2013

Lovely rhyme and rythem Jasmeen, a delightful read. Thanks.

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Unwritten Soul 16 June 2013

Beautiful, but wait, summer still bloom and green and no leaves leaving before it green, as much no new life before past a time, our present, so do feel the moment you have...and dont let it melt for something yet it something to be missed heartfelt...liked your poem! the title so nice_Soul

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Farah Ilyas 16 June 2013

imagery & nature seem to be under ur hold...hats off for u sis..10+++

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Valsa George 15 June 2013

Life in autumn in mellowing hues, autumn leaves under the feet and the dove singing above her autumn songs.! Amid all these she ambling away in queenly swirl! A beautiful and vivid picture! Indeed a beautiful poem Jasmeen! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 June 2013

An awesome poem with a wry touch but d imagery is great poetic! Enjoyd many lines.

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