Thursday, June 18, 2009

She Thinks... She Says... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her pencil can't write down what she has in mind
what passed away and what is still alive
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Hala Hash.
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Afzal Shauq 23 June 2009

she's on her way back to miss independent any building road is never closed and hard to end These; ast lines of your poems are making the theme rich and I agree with you that 'she' means a perfet humankind may never stop the advancement towards success or freedom to enjoy humanity with collective behavior... this poem is done perfectly and the logic is very encouraging and charmful... well done friend..10+++++++++

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Hazem Al Jaber 22 June 2009

confused she is... thinks alot, but nothing can say.. she needs alot, , nothing she got.. amazing and penned so lovely.. keep on.. yours, , hazem al..

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