Where all the stars forge, there
I concede, that each day,
I do tread to meet her youthful age.
Fond clouds of smiles uncover her
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A wordsmith, that's what I will call you. You choice of words are perfectly perfect as they display a vivid image of how tender and beautiful she is. Good workbof art. -Joseph Oladehinde Ibikunle, Nigeria
Great imagery you have used to describe this maiden's beauty. An innocent and tender young love, timid and shy comes through your gentle poem. Wonderful poem! Enjoyed the purity of love you speak through this poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn