Thursday, October 16, 2014

She, The Maiden From My Village. Comments

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Where all the stars forge, there
I concede, that each day,
I do tread to meet her youthful age.
Fond clouds of smiles uncover her
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Agboyi Felix
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Roseann Shawiak 30 June 2015

Great imagery you have used to describe this maiden's beauty. An innocent and tender young love, timid and shy comes through your gentle poem. Wonderful poem! Enjoyed the purity of love you speak through this poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Oladehinde J Ibikunle 21 October 2014

A wordsmith, that's what I will call you. You choice of words are perfectly perfect as they display a vivid image of how tender and beautiful she is. Good workbof art. -Joseph Oladehinde Ibikunle, Nigeria

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