Saturday, August 22, 2009

She 'The Clot-Buster' Comments

Rating: 4.7

I was young I was alone,
I was tired of talkin with imaginary clone
So I was real sad,
It was the time when I had clots in my heart,
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Rahul Rajawat
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Obinna Eruchie 15 September 2009

How you are determined in the end to move on to seek a meaning beyond and leave behind the life affected by her clot-busting, good for you. KEEP WRITING TO BE MORE INSPIRED.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 06 September 2009

Your first poem in poemhunter itself sounds very good. Please keep on writing like this.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 27 August 2009

The clots in the heart get bustered by the love of a lifetime.Excellent execution of words Rahul.A job well done.

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