She Teaches The Life From Whence She Comes Comments

Hello once again Chris! This is a very good story poem again from the folds and bindings of the bible but it well written and tell the tale in a righteous way and delivers the morals extreemly well and embeds itself in the readers mind. Well done! Just a couple of things my friend, line 4 in stanza two should buy not bye, and line 20 in stanza 2 should end in 'with nothing to lose' just a couple of typos mate nothing serious, so a veyr good effort indeed! keep up the good writing! Dale :)