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o.o so i think that.....this was..... sooooo friffin gooood! ! ! ! ! ....sad but i dont care xP

wow, that's a really good, yet sad story in poem form....i'll keep reading more of your poems. :)

This poem is just amazing to me. Continue to write because you definitely know what you are doing with that pen.

I read all your poems and think this is your best work. A sad story though. You have a lot of talent and I hope you keep writing. Proof reading your work would add to their value. All the best. Jim

This is my favourite poem of yours. Its so real like your there with her your imagry is amazing. Good job. =]

I really enjoyed this poem. you could feel her sadness and had no idea until the end, what she was counting. Very creative