Monday, October 20, 2008

She Stands There Pale Comments

Rating: 3.0

An anti war poem based on the story of andromache wife of hector who's son was torn from her arms and thrown from the battlements of troy.She was then sold into slavery. THE STORY HAS BEEN REPEATED MANY TIMES IN THE LAST 4000 YRS

SHE STANDS THERE PALE
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JAMES ROBERTS
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Colin Jeffery 27 November 2008

Great work from the Muse.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 October 2008

Wonderful composition. Love it with 10.

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Fay Slimm 25 October 2008

I love the repetition of 'she stands there' It adds strength to the whole picture of this wonder of might - nerved with an inner light - beautifully phrased Jim. A very well deserved 10 + +

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 October 2008

Great narration with all necessary ingradients, poignance, pain and tragedy.10

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Lynda Robson 20 October 2008

A sad story told so well by you James, well done, I enjoyed reading this, Lynda xx

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