An anti war poem based on the story of andromache wife of hector who's son was torn from her arms and thrown from the battlements of troy.She was then sold into slavery. THE STORY HAS BEEN REPEATED MANY TIMES IN THE LAST 4000 YRS
SHE STANDS THERE PALE
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I love the repetition of 'she stands there' It adds strength to the whole picture of this wonder of might - nerved with an inner light - beautifully phrased Jim. A very well deserved 10 + +
Great narration with all necessary ingradients, poignance, pain and tragedy.10
A sad story told so well by you James, well done, I enjoyed reading this, Lynda xx
Great work from the Muse.