She Stands There Ironing Comments

katie- this is a beautiful poem. I found your profile after reading more of Billy Collins' poems. You have a gift and it's neat that you are sharing it. Libby~

Outstanding portrait you have created here. The metaphors you use are well constructed and gives the work an emotional punch. 'she stands there ironing' is a superb image, when one consider the creaselessness that use to be there. Awesome work Kate!

This is lovely, Katie, a wonderful description of your mother, with 'whipped cream soft cheeks and infectous smile.' Love, Fran xx