Monday, July 27, 2015

She Speaks And I Listen To Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whatever she speaks I understand,
She speaks from her eyes and my eyes read it,
She speaks from her lips and my lips read it,
She speaks from her hands and my hands read it,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 27 July 2015

Separation seems to have filled your mind with thoughts about her and I feel you have forgotten every other thing! I think this is real conjugal bliss!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2015

Very nicely and wisely depicted. Enjoyed. The lines I like best are.. When my wife starts speaking her mother language, I forget understanding my mother language, So you now know all of my conjugal life! Thanks for sharing. ....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2015

Deeply envisioned and wisely presented. A byzantine expression. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. ....10

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Khalida Bano Ali 27 July 2015

Enjoyed this beautiful poem, may be a truth or a lie..........................10

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