Thursday, April 5, 2018

She Snapped The Neck Comments

Rating: 5.0

A red eyed vulture flew over her head
Shadows of wide opened wings fell on her
It came to her life like a twister tornado
and it was hard to withstand the blow
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Rini Shibu
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Robert Murray Smith 20 June 2018

A powerful write. We see the picture very clearly.++10

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Rebecca Navarre 16 April 2018

A Very Heart Felt And Powerful Story, Poem! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rini Shibu 17 April 2018

Thanks Rebecca Navarre..! ! ! ! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 07 April 2018

A great poem with an unexpected conclusion!

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Rini Shibu 07 April 2018

Thanks Kostas..! ! Rini

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Lamar Cole 05 April 2018

This is a very thrilling and very interesting write.

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Rini Shibu 07 April 2018

Thanks Lamar for posting your remarks..! ! Rini

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 April 2018

Strain, pain! Never again! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 07 April 2018

Thanks Edward for visiting this poem.., ! ! Rini

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Akhtar Jawad 05 April 2018

Then she said 'I am not afraid anymore and no force can touch me evermore.' A lovely story nicely narrated.

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Rini Shibu 07 April 2018

Thanks Akhtarji for your comment.. Rini

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 April 2018

A lovely adventurous story, new to your readers and fans. Please add one of this type a week, . Thanks dear Rini for the sharing.

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Rini Shibu 07 April 2018

Thanks Subhas, I will try to

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