Sunday, May 1, 2005

She Sleeps: 1: 53 Am Comments

Rating: 4.0

she sleeps
in our comfy bed, rain drumming a musical massage
while the idea bulbs burn in this distant room
with clocks ticking, keyboard clicking
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Chuck Audette
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Moth Harris 08 June 2007

Very nice it paints good picture in my mind and I think I sence a lot of symbolic meaning in this poem, I really like it.

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Esther Leclerc 25 February 2006

A peaceful slice of life... Thanks for sharing. Another bravo!

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Amberlee Carter 16 June 2005

interesting and original....bravo

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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