Saturday, February 10, 2018

She Showed Her Love (Rondeau) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The child had a relative Maria. She showed her love
when she smiled with loving eyes, the kind of
love a child needs, while her own mother did berate,
with scolding and insults, showing her hate,
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Grace Jessen 21 February 2018

A touching story. Glad to see you trying the rondeau form. It's a challenge.

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Kim Barney 13 February 2018

Amazing story and beautiful message.

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Spock The Vegan 12 February 2018

Thank you all for your kind comments. I couldn't reply to any of you below because of the persistent Poemhunter error 'Connection was reset.

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Marieta Maglas 12 February 2018

Your poem is a beautiful message. Without love, this world can disappear. Thank you for sharing. Voted 10.

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Chris Embrick 12 February 2018

A heart felt poem. Sad that so many experience abuse in this world. 's angels are always watching. 10+++++

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Chris Embrick 12 February 2018

A heart felt poem.. Sad that so many are abused in this world. In Heaven 's angels always watch the little ones. Thank you kind friend. and thanks for the comment about my Rondeau poem: Lords of Survival. Live long and prosper.10+++++

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Bill Cantrell 10 February 2018

When an experience in life impels to write, life has extended its hand to those who can learn and benefit, many can be moved by such a poem, thank you for posting my friend

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