Sunday, January 25, 2009

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She says she needs time,
I'll give her all she needs.
She says she's not mad,
I still give her the time.
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Natalie Guyette 25 January 2009

i've definately been in your situation before. dont worry, it ends... eventually. i think. dont take my word for it. but i guess there's one good thing that comes out of it, when your feeling mad/lonely/sad, i usually write really good during those times and apparently you do too. liked the poem, also liked the title.im one of those people who like short and sweet titles.(especially in books) keep on writin!

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