She Said, He Said Comments

This morning I was going through some of your earlier poems and this simple one caught my eyes. The parting ways of the two lovers have been portrayed simplistically here. The note adds the final words. Beautifully written! 10/10.

A beautiful rhythm... reminiscent of a haiku in the aspect of the lovers' juxtaposition... the simplicity is sensational... very refreshing! Well penned!

Wow, this was just..amazing. Thanks for all the love on my poetry and you can bet I'll definitely be looking more into yours. Great job

I like the poem, lovers lost.

This is a creative way to tell between two lovers that play contrast interest...a very good idea to me! _Soul