Tuesday, October 24, 2006

She Said... Comments

Rating: 4.7

She quietly said, 'Milton... I love you.'
His light heart ballooned to the moon.
She flew out - - 'So shy! ' he thought, but he knew
That wedding bells would clanggg very soon.
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Esther Leclerc
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Robert E Hann 07 February 2007

You know, ...I think that happened once...to ME! ! HAHA...love it anyway. Robert

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Utterly hilariously wonderful! A shining juxtaposition of soaring emotion and watching it all come down (so to speak) .... t x

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Scarlett Treat 01 November 2006

This was just hysterically funny...poor Milty! Lucky ' Hugh' (for writing such a funny poem!)

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Will Barber 31 October 2006

Brilliant, just brilliant!

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M S 30 October 2006

nice twist, you really had me going there... i wonder what was the inspiration. cheers, masha

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Brian Dorn 30 October 2006

Esther the jester strikes again... very hu(gh) morous! ! Brian

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R H 28 October 2006

Esther, your wonderful humour abounds - simply superb! Grinning...Justine :)

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Alison Cassidy 27 October 2006

Esther, this is superb. Talk about slapstick! Brilliant punch line. Poor old Milton. Silly twisted boy. 'His light heart ballooned to the moon' is exquisite! love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Danny Reynolds 25 October 2006

Hugh must be Joe King? ; ¬) Danny

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Uriah Hamilton 24 October 2006

Ha, ha, poor Milton! ! !

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 October 2006

Esther, you wrote with your pitchfork today, now admit it! Quite an amusing Read....I am not what one would characterize as a'laugher', however, there was a pronounced bellow heard by all in my general vicinity, upon my Reading the final line of your work....''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Chuck Audette 24 October 2006

Are you sure she wasn't talking about her favorite color 'olive hue'? Fun one, Est! -chuck

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Anna Russell 24 October 2006

Hee hee hee! Loved this Esther, thanks for the giggle. (looks like our Chuck's got some competition in the humour stakes!) Hugs Anna xxx

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