The sound of your voice
Echoes in my mind day and night,
Its like a sweet lullaby.
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I have not read your poems before, but I will certainly do so from now on. You write in a beautiful manner.
woooow! ! ! wat a... keep it up Ndwandwe, uma engasho kim nje kanje. lol
Very touching lines, right from the bottom of a lovers' heart. Only thing is the one on the other should listen it! Kudos, great 10
She said...... When darkness invades my life, You become the shining moon of my life.
This is a lovely warm poem of eternal love that was a joy to read. It would make a good sonet if you chose to write one.
So what a radiant presence you give her! ! You can bask in the sunshine of her unalloyed love and feel proud that in your manliness, she has found her anchorage! A lovely romantic piece! !
Powerful love, it gives not only the strenght and hope to smile through life, but a magic performance for all of us to admire your pen, thank you for sharing another fine write!
Looks like she has a great admiration for you. Love her and never give any reason for her to change her mind. This is a special, lovely relationship.
an Amazingly Beautiful write... thank you for taking the time to reading and commenting on my work.
Beautiful and so loving, I wish there was such a love next to me, to see me through it all, or just to turn to! I love 'She Said'....such a fitting title for a excellent poem!
How sweet and lovely Siya, very romantic and heartfelt - a great read.
When darkness invades my life, You become the shining moon of my life beautiful! ! !
Imnandi lenkondlo, kumnandi ukuba nomuntu okuthandayo futhi okwethemba ngaloluhlobo
so romantic, i love it.. it seems to me that your source of life is same of me..... keep on going...10
Wow, she must be very in love with you She has high regards of you and seems like she considers you her hero congrats and congrats for this wonderful poem.
thanks Naida, for the poem. and I have high regards of her too. lol