Friday, November 13, 2015

She's Torn. Comments

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She sat there today, crying again.
She's dreading the day she sees the truth.
Here he is once again, showing her he won this round.
She fears hes right, she may give in this time.
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Davina Teeling
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Souren Mondal 14 November 2015

A very well written poem, apart from the typos.. Thank you for sharing...

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