Monday, May 19, 2014

She's Not Afraid Tonight Comments

Rating: 5.0

with the fuzzy edges of her floating
down to the smooth riverside boulders
with all those pebbles in her pockets
drifting without bizarre hesitation
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Professor Plum
COMMENTS
A B Faniki 11 August 2019

Simple and elegant piece. Keep the images coming. Cheers

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Bri Edwards 22 March 2018

do i possible 'dare' to put this into my April showcase? ? ? ? hmmm? bri :) this one DID go to MyPoemList; the other one not yet.

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Bri Edwards 22 March 2018

1. Also called Great Ouse. a river in E England, flowing NE to the Wash.160 miles (260 km) long.2. a river in NE England, in Yorkshire, flowing SE to the Humber.57 miles (92 km) long. am i correct? :) i would (perhaps) have enjoyed viewing her fuzzy edges [i think YOU have some also, Professor], .......and her wafting pantaloons. to MyPoemList. THIS ONE really does pertain to the topic of fashion! ! ! bri :)

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Howard Savage 08 January 2016

Very profound poem with an edge to it.

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