Wednesday, November 22, 2006

She's Mine! Comments

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She’s mine!
And with the simple twist of a simple, metal tab
She flies!
And even the flight of jets is not the same.
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Nouri Black 30 November 2006

for a second i thought u meant a bird in a cage or somthin...then as i read on it turned out its abt a car! ! ! a truly amazin peom! ! love! ! it made me laugh! !

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David Dennis 24 November 2006

Ah...you must own a Porche or the like. I on the other hand drive a beater. Cars, I guess you should enjoy them but I am challenged by the carnage they harvest. Hmmm... I guess I should just stop being negative and get a good one. That'll make people notice my midlife crisis. Another good poem Ross and you managed to use the word 'pulchritude' without sounding pompous or silly.

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