The girl with dark and beautiful hair,
Her eyes are lovely and her skin fair.
She is like a full bloomed flower
With beauty, I can’t bear
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Very well written. Alas! It seems that all the good people are married!
Comical, but altogether a little too true. Married, engaged, seeing another... it's all the same. The woman or man of your dreams right there in your grasp, yet infinitely out of reach. Wonderful. 10.
Man has limitations, but dreams don't have. A funny poem indeed.
LOOK BEYOND Come- join the gang, a million more have made it their passtime! To this, What is it so new that you bring? Chasing skirts, priests of flesh & skin How do you separate yourself from them &hope to win?
i liked it really....i thought the last part about you fearing her husband was funny though....
Good poem like a tasty biscuits with the coffe, thanks for sharing,10
Your eyes can wander and then that can get you in trouble now that would be funny NOTHING WRONG WITH THE APPRECIATION OF BEAUTY with wishful thinking cheers
Has ever she been proposed by you? Or remainder is the poet, always fears.
ha ha.. i think i had come across this joke somewhere before too..
Good one Vikram. Reflecting the natural sense or humour that we Indians are known for. It is really refreshing and enjoyable to come across such poems.
magnificent! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! you deserve more than a beautiful girl... :) 10ss
Excellent poem! You understand human feelings and give a beautiful expression to them.