Monday, May 1, 2006

She's Married Comments

Rating: 4.6

The girl with dark and beautiful hair,
Her eyes are lovely and her skin fair.
She is like a full bloomed flower
With beauty, I can’t bear
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Vikram Aarella - The Poem Shooter
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K. V. Venkataramana 10 September 2016

Excellent poem! You understand human feelings and give a beautiful expression to them.

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Eyan Desir 17 September 2009

Get another woman.....adultery is a sin 10s this was funny

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Stacey Pinto 17 September 2009

nice piece love how it ended in a funny note

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Supriya Prathapan 13 September 2009

Very well written. Alas! It seems that all the good people are married!

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Kale Beaudry 01 September 2009

Comical, but altogether a little too true. Married, engaged, seeing another... it's all the same. The woman or man of your dreams right there in your grasp, yet infinitely out of reach. Wonderful. 10.

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K. V. Venkataramana 21 August 2009

Man has limitations, but dreams don't have. A funny poem indeed.

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Seema Joglekar 19 August 2009

LOOK BEYOND Come- join the gang, a million more have made it their passtime! To this, What is it so new that you bring? Chasing skirts, priests of flesh & skin How do you separate yourself from them &hope to win?

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Ency Bearis 18 August 2009

nice write with catch of humorous end....

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Priya K 18 August 2009

This poem's brilliant! ! Utterly hilarious :)

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Ahtivah Lawton 17 August 2009

haha funni how that ended...good write

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Tanesha Davenport 17 August 2009

i liked it really....i thought the last part about you fearing her husband was funny though....

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Vinod Kumar 17 August 2009

Good poem like a tasty biscuits with the coffe, thanks for sharing,10

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Ken E Hall 17 August 2009

Your eyes can wander and then that can get you in trouble now that would be funny NOTHING WRONG WITH THE APPRECIATION OF BEAUTY with wishful thinking cheers

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Jerry Abrahamson 17 August 2009

GOod poem. I am in the same situation.

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Hari Khabrani 17 August 2009

Has ever she been proposed by you? Or remainder is the poet, always fears.

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Deepti Agarwal 17 August 2009

ha ha.. i think i had come across this joke somewhere before too..

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Raja Basu 17 August 2009

Good one Vikram. Reflecting the natural sense or humour that we Indians are known for. It is really refreshing and enjoyable to come across such poems.

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Dibakar Sarkar 16 August 2009

Funny indeed. It's almost a poem.

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Ahmad Saqer 16 August 2009

cool poem, Vikram ;) i like it

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Omar Ibrahim 16 August 2009

magnificent! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! you deserve more than a beautiful girl... :) 10ss

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