~ She's Lost ~ Comments
She's lost and on a downward slope.
Falling fast, no safety rope. She is
twenty-one, but aged much more as
she walks down the hall and through
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Thad, Very sad poem. A devil should not celebrate, Stolen generations is enough... All best. Tsira
Strong mesage...Eloquently delivered...I like your employment of the wrap-around stanzaic structure...Woks well...and keeps the Readers eyes in flow with the poem...Solid Penning, Thad! F j R 2009
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7/23/2025 8:56:15 AM # 1.0.0
Thad, this is a sad story mate, so often told is her story makes you think of all those wasted lives... Andy 10