She lies alone upon her bed
With a million thoughts
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wow. very dramatic and sad. I could picture the whole scene. Good use of words.
sad and haunting but good and keep up the good work i agree with Jon Lloyd is there more cause it looks like this poem has more to it
kate, very engaging, i almost feel as if i am her as i read this. beautiful. excellent start.
Having read this again.... It is a remarkable poem and one so many of us at sometme in our lives can relate to... Who we are in the inside is not how it appears on the oustside.... Complexed human science 10 +++++++=