She's Electric Comments
She lights up the place
With her mega-watt smile
When she walks into a room,
She's electric.
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i like the use (once) of eclectic. now, all you need to do to write about ME is to change 7 " she" s/" she's" to 7 " he" s/" he's" , one " Miss" to one " Mr" , and 2 " her" s to 2 " his" s. bri ;)
She sounds like a women who knows how to sizzle, and knows how to make a everyman shrivel, passionate and playful, I like the sexiness of this piece. can we have more?
Kevin, I'm back on site now after an extensive absence due to moving- - I'll get to work on that 'more' posthaste! Thanks for reading and commenting! : -)
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8/20/2025 5:29:32 PM # 1.0.0
'Eclectic' goes so well with 'electric' I was wondering if you were going to name Miss Electric-like Beyonce. I like her.
Thanks, Michael. I didn't exactly have Beyonce in mind when I wrote this. But, happy for you that you like her! : -)