She's Broken Comments
She's been through alot,
I'll have said hell and back,
But i've realized hell is her abode,
The very territory of an enemy,
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You have gotten inside the female mind and heart and soul with this poem that, given its content, makes you a master of sensitivity. You do not mince words- you paint a brutal portrait of this man and woman. Sent chills down by back. And those last 2 lines? Perfect closure- in tune with the harsh directness of the rest of the poem. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and a like for you as a poet and a place on my fav list for this poem
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7/23/2025 10:57:08 AM # 1.0.0
A nice write... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too... Naila