She’s A Tear That Hangs Inside My Soul Forever Comments

sad but why steal Jeff Buckley's lyrics?

That was amazing. I didn't expect the ending

''God has had his way The day has come I’ll never get to say “I love you, Mum” '' God the creator, created all things there are in the Universe.God the creator and the devil has a relationship with each other.And a mother is the most important person between them.Well written poem..10

holy **** that is amazing! ! ! it's more then a 'wow' and deserves 4 stars! ! great job!

This poem made me gasp when it ended. You have captured grief in such a creative way. Just say how much you love her when you close your eyes every night before you go to sleep. She will hear you I know. A bitter sweet poem straight from your heart. Karin Anderson

Very beautiful poem and title, sadly expressed. Bring joy to your heart with spiritual thoughts of her. Jim

so very sad. very nice work though.