Hey, listen, do you hear that?
A voice that's seraphical,
Is singing the songs of love,
Of love which is sensual!
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hi, Leslie.i didn.t sow ur age, but the poem is good, is rite from love, and is grait...but u have some lirycs were is not existing right ryme...and rythm..but the message of poem is very goodd
I love it its awsome. I love a man that can write some beautiful and romantic poetry.
Great! :) ... as i digested the lines i could franky imagine her, Bravo! It a divine piece indeed
Its a wonderful poem, so sweet and gracefuly written, crys...at the beauty of the poem.
Hi Leslie I liked the gentle feeling of being almost enveloped in heavenly choral bliss and can imagine your ST Amelie perfectly.Well done! 10
You picture Amelie in such a wonderful poetic way, that the reader of this poem would have wished to be there and see. very well done, Leslie.
Wonderfully imagined.. you sketch a virtual world around the reader.. Thanks for sharing this.. Nice 1 :)
A truly great poem. Really good write. Really enjoyed reading it.
You have created the perfect girl of your dreams, Amelie. I love the way you describe her so pure and her singing so beautiful. Love the last two lines. I'm sure you will meet someone like that one day. Blessing to you.
So romantic and lovely poem, , the story that u made it up in ur poem inspiring the whole world around me, , It's more than a love story like in the movies cuz the difference between love story of Romeo and Juliet for example and ur love story, , is that the love story of the movie was written by script writer while urs was written by God, , Imagine the difference between them, , nice poem my friend, , love ur work rated 10 :)
Nice, Love it I like it