Friday, April 30, 2010

She's A Mystery (Awdl Gywydd) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hey, listen, do you hear that?
A voice that's seraphical,
Is singing the songs of love,
Of love which is sensual!
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Leslie Alexis
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Habibur Rahman 13 November 2011

Nice, Love it I like it

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Neagu Geta 12 November 2011

hi, Leslie.i didn.t sow ur age, but the poem is good, is rite from love, and is grait...but u have some lirycs were is not existing right ryme...and rythm..but the message of poem is very goodd

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Darkangel Flyfree 11 November 2011

I love it its awsome. I love a man that can write some beautiful and romantic poetry.

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Great! :) ... as i digested the lines i could franky imagine her, Bravo! It a divine piece indeed

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Kaila George 11 November 2011

Its a wonderful poem, so sweet and gracefuly written, crys...at the beauty of the poem.

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Eric Cockrell 11 November 2011

beautiful poetry, written by a gentle heart!

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Margaret Beil 11 November 2011

Hi Leslie I liked the gentle feeling of being almost enveloped in heavenly choral bliss and can imagine your ST Amelie perfectly.Well done! 10

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Dougie Darko 11 November 2011

I really enjoyed reading this very much! ! !

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Hans Vr 11 November 2011

You picture Amelie in such a wonderful poetic way, that the reader of this poem would have wished to be there and see. very well done, Leslie.

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Jinal Oswal 11 November 2011

Wonderfully imagined.. you sketch a virtual world around the reader.. Thanks for sharing this.. Nice 1 :)

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Coke Cola 11 November 2011

hey leslie...nice! ! :)

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Dave Walker 11 November 2011

A truly great poem. Really good write. Really enjoyed reading it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 July 2011

what an fantastic imagery! ! ! beautiful ink.liked it.

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Luz Hanaii 20 July 2011

You have created the perfect girl of your dreams, Amelie. I love the way you describe her so pure and her singing so beautiful. Love the last two lines. I'm sure you will meet someone like that one day. Blessing to you.

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Abdallah Gamal 19 July 2011

So romantic and lovely poem, , the story that u made it up in ur poem inspiring the whole world around me, , It's more than a love story like in the movies cuz the difference between love story of Romeo and Juliet for example and ur love story, , is that the love story of the movie was written by script writer while urs was written by God, , Imagine the difference between them, , nice poem my friend, , love ur work rated 10 :)

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