She rocks
She loves to rock
She would rather rock
At rock clubs
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A strong poem that shows that even with responsiblities we can still dream. A 10 from me! -Storm
Good poem! What do you mean by she rocks? Do you mean she rocks like she plays the guitar and she is wild or she rocks like she is the best? Oh well! Still, this was a good poem!
Unfortunately it's difficult to chase our dreams b/c society and its pressures intervenes in our quest. Great poem...I thought the ending was very powerful. Top marks! -Michael
Thanks for sharing your concern for those who do their best but keep on suffering despite their efforts.