You reawaken her love for you
instilled in her mind that she's
the most beautiful in your eyes
poetry of trees, birds and skies
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Sentiments of longing and betrayal expressed quite beautifully. This is also a study in human psychology. Thanks for this insightful poem.
Thank you so much Mr. Rajnish Manga... I appreciate your comment sir...
Pheonix1, you are welcome...I dont want you put your trouble with you for more when you pick someone is not right, it maybe not worth for you...you have a such long beautiful life to live for many years, i dont dare to give an order but i tell you because its not right if i see something may hurt you and i do nothing... i mean at this time, you have to pick to build your life better with people who really appreciate you...there are many out there :) There always many reasons to hurt, but have right to avoid if we could it from happen. stay bright and be blessed
Is it okay for you to sacrifice the feeling, is it fine to you to live in between..of undecided heart, of this time that you keep on waiting...I afraid if he chose you, will he be loyal still, if he chose her why you still ask for his... Have some loves for your lovely life...you are worth for something, someone that treat you better
Thank you very much Unwritten Soul for the beautiful comment and advice... It is truly heart warming... Thank you :)
This is a reality...Really a heartfelt poem, i can almost feel you...I love the way it was written...Thank you for sharing Phoenix1 Smith...Perfect 10
Thank you so much Miss Cheryl Tutaan... I truly appreciate your comment... :)