Tuesday, March 14, 2006

She Offers More Than Too Much Comments

Rating: 4.5

Dark eyes of velvet stone
Wild angel dancing all alone
Lips like blood red wine
She's looking more than fine
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Carlos Rodriguez
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Theresa Rayman 07 April 2006

Carlos, This is wonderful. I love the flow and the unforced rhyme pattern. You have painted a lovely, vivid picture here with your words. Excellent work! Blessings! - TGR(Theresa)

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