Monday, August 28, 2006

She Of The Craft Comments

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She enters the room
All eyes turn
All eyes burn
Her skin
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***** ********* 28 August 2006

Wonderful magical write on angels and what their love can bring, you take us through the apocholypse senario of ignoring her portents of doom and through the gloom to hope and love in the final lines! Perfect 10 but there was a typo 'one' instead of 'once' twice up there somewhere. Smiling at your romantic poetic heart. Thoroughly enjoyed this but must go eat Lunch now! Tai

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David Lacey

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