She takes all the pain,
she never gives any,
She takes all the strain,
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beautiful poem..it is delicate to appreciate what she takes and what she gives
it's a good poem and you are a good poet...You leave behind statements and questions that just dangle...
Short and simple, but with a great message - good one, and I think you are a poet! !
Your write like a true poet, I dare you to write more, please I would like to see more of your work, throws the gaunlet down, are you ready for the challange my friend.
nice write...I can feel your adoration in this work...thx for sharing...blessings....and keep up the good writing of your soul....
Beautifully written, I was zoned there for a moment because it was so pleasant to read. Thank you for sharing...
the white mellow She takes all the blame, But she never gives any,
This is really good. Good write. May i invite you To read my poem called, boy to a man.
great credit to the lady you love.....well written...loved it....... :)
simple and beautiful. who is this lady? mother, i suppose. pl. read some of mine and judge. shan
you really rocked........... that is the skill given to women by god to take all the pains and give back love and care to their beloved ones with great patience and sincerety.you proved that you are a keen observer. i loved it. very nice. keep it up! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Lovely :) such a sweet poem.