Saturday, September 17, 2011

She Never Gives Any................ Comments

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She takes all the pain,
she never gives any,

She takes all the strain,
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I am not A POET
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Meena Mustafa 29 July 2012

Lovely :) such a sweet poem.

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Ahmed Abomahfouz 07 July 2012

beautiful poem..it is delicate to appreciate what she takes and what she gives

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Jasbir Chatterjee 01 July 2012

it's a good poem and you are a good poet...You leave behind statements and questions that just dangle...

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Valerie Dohren 30 June 2012

Short and simple, but with a great message - good one, and I think you are a poet! !

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Kaila George 26 June 2012

Your write like a true poet, I dare you to write more, please I would like to see more of your work, throws the gaunlet down, are you ready for the challange my friend.

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Vipins Puthooran 23 June 2012

Really good poem! ! ! !

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Neela Nath Das 21 June 2012

Simple but respect for her showered thru words.Wonderful.

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Soulful Heart 05 March 2012

is that ur mother? ...........................nicely put

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Ranis Thomas iii 02 February 2012

Very nice! Simple and straight to the point!

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Arathy Sj 10 November 2011

nice poem...it says a lot with a few words...lovely.. :)

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(De Va) 05 November 2011

nice write...I can feel your adoration in this work...thx for sharing...blessings....and keep up the good writing of your soul....

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Theany Ouy 29 October 2011

Beautifully written, I was zoned there for a moment because it was so pleasant to read. Thank you for sharing...

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Kee Thampi 26 October 2011

the white mellow She takes all the blame, But she never gives any,

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Marcus Mckinley 25 October 2011

reminds one of a mothers love, unconditional great job

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Dave Walker 18 September 2011

This is really good. Good write. May i invite you To read my poem called, boy to a man.

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Nanthinii Mohan 18 September 2011

great credit to the lady you love.....well written...loved it....... :)

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 September 2011

simple and beautiful. who is this lady? mother, i suppose. pl. read some of mine and judge. shan

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Sajna Kailas 18 September 2011

you really rocked........... that is the skill given to women by god to take all the pains and give back love and care to their beloved ones with great patience and sincerety.you proved that you are a keen observer. i loved it. very nice. keep it up! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Renu Kakkar 17 September 2011

very nice...depicting womenhood but more would be mother

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Stefanie Fontker 17 September 2011

Very beautiful poem, I like this, great writing.

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