I have a friend on poem hunter
she has gone deep
and under.
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Encouraging others is a worthy pursuit. We all have are dry spells and there is only one way to write better poems and that is to keep reading other good poets and to keep on writing. In regard to your poem, I like these lines: she has gone deep and under. My poems used to glow, But now there all bad under the snow.
Poems can be written under a tree in the sunshine... everyone can tell a tale as good as any...kind thoughts nice way to travel nice poeem regards