Thursday, July 30, 2009

She Might Quit Comments

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I have a friend on poem hunter
she has gone deep
and under.
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M.J. Daniels
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Ken E Hall 31 July 2009

Poems can be written under a tree in the sunshine... everyone can tell a tale as good as any...kind thoughts nice way to travel nice poeem regards

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sky dreams 30 July 2009

You have a very kind heart, M.J and are clearly a good friend.

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Ben Gieske 30 July 2009

Encouraging others is a worthy pursuit. We all have are dry spells and there is only one way to write better poems and that is to keep reading other good poets and to keep on writing. In regard to your poem, I like these lines: she has gone deep and under. My poems used to glow, But now there all bad under the snow.

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