Thursday, November 16, 2006

She Makes Herself Look Beatifull Comments

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she makes herself look beatifull,
so the world cant see her scars,
she hides the sadness in those
pills, with out them, shes a broken
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Patricia Gale 17 November 2006

Sad but you have delivered this piece well!

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Donna Nimmo 16 November 2006

A very good poem. I can really relate to this one. You write with such feeling.Donna

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 November 2006

VERY SOLID WORK, DAVID....AND PRISTINE STRUCTURE TO THE HILT! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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