Monday, November 2, 2015

She Looked, We Touched, We Connected Comments

Rating: 5.0

i know, on the sly, she looked
back at me, a couple of times

if that happens again
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Chuy Amante
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Sanjukta Nag 02 November 2015

Wow the connection was made and you portrayed it slowly and sweetly. Beautiful poem. thank you.

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M Asim Nehal 02 November 2015

Great connection, I suppose this connection was not only between mortal body but also between the immortal souls.........Great poem on love.....100++

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 November 2015

'Walking the path' of your dream. Nice work.

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