She lays in her grave like an empty house
Stands on an empty street,
Done with the giving and receiving,
No more concern, for feet-
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Beautifully written Patti. There is real tenderness and acceptance in this.
A lovely poem Patti - a good expression of how we try to keep lost loved ones alive in our minds and hearts.
A lovely poem Patti expressing how we all try to keep alive lost loved ones through our memories of them.
beautiful, though there is a sadness that is heard throughout this poem, there is a happiness that overshadows this peace... i've seen this, i know this feeling
a deep sense of peace in this one that i like a lot!