Friday, March 16, 2012

She Looked Toward Tomorrow Comments

Rating: 5.0

She lays in her grave like an empty house
Stands on an empty street,
Done with the giving and receiving,
No more concern, for feet-
...
Read full text

Patti Masterman
COMMENTS
Eric Cockrell 17 March 2012

a deep sense of peace in this one that i like a lot!

0 0 Reply
Martin O'Neill 17 March 2012

Beautifully written Patti. There is real tenderness and acceptance in this.

0 0 Reply
Valerie Dohren 16 March 2012

A lovely poem Patti - a good expression of how we try to keep lost loved ones alive in our minds and hearts.

0 0 Reply
Valerie Dohren 16 March 2012

A lovely poem Patti expressing how we all try to keep alive lost loved ones through our memories of them.

0 0 Reply
Ladawn Trice 16 March 2012

beautiful, though there is a sadness that is heard throughout this poem, there is a happiness that overshadows this peace... i've seen this, i know this feeling

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success