I know those clouds are the passengers
Of this wide sky and my true messengers;
Those wispy clouds drift across the sky,
Secretly carry the message in me.
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Poem shows your single feeling. Still feeling show you being single feeler dear which keeps you singly happy! ! !
nice work, simple words but deep feelings.at the end the question every malayali asks kollathu evideyanu veedu?
as you sail upon the wind to a place that she has been, you will find such beauty...blessings....
The passenger clouds will truly act as messengers and make this eternal, symbolic love to flourish across the boundaries. Great sentiments are flowing with ease in the magical hands.
Passionate love, it will be a eternal fuel to flame warm blanket around you..It such a rich feeling you created here, a lovely touch_Unwritten Soul
nice, nice, very nice.What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading too. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us.
WOW! Its amazing... The title itself is too attractive and it conveys the deep passion of the poet. Nice Work! !
Eureka! What jumping love rhyme, I too created many love rhymes but couldn't get this feeling and tinge! a blasting poems with lines like these with lambent glow peeks every heart... She will feel my love in the whisper of this breeze Like I give her cheek an affectionate squeeze A Romanesque love poem! Great going fellow poet with baronial heart! You won my ADMIRATION! 10+++++++++++++=
The passengers on the sky(clouds) are the messengers to you to convey your mails. Fantastic! From the time past to time future, she has been and will be your love. Wonderful! 100%
Wow! really the love bug has striked you...this poem is superb my friend... And the bees they moon around the flower carry the elixir of my love as a shower to the one i love who lives far away.
Nature is beautifully involved in this connection...it's rich...both in spirit n attire...nice poem to feel proud on! vipins...