Sunday, April 10, 2016

She Lives Beautiful (Sonnet) Comments

Rating: 4.0

(after George Gordon, Lord Byron)

She has a kind of inner glow
that is reflected in her eyes
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Gert Strydom
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Tom Billsborough 10 April 2016

Sonnets are not easy to write but I think you've done well here. How she flows in her dress... That's a fine phrase. The poem flows at a gentle pace. Tom billsborough

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Johannesburg, South Africa
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