Monday, April 9, 2007

She Left Me Comments

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She left me,
She left like she arrived,
With no decency or emotion,
But still a twinkle in her eye.
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Richard Lexus
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Original Unknown Girl 10 April 2007

Tinged with sadness yet embellished with hope. Never change for anyone, your constancy was your saving grace. Keep that way, someone will appreciate it when you've grieved this loss. HG: -) xx

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Zoe Gascoigne 09 April 2007

James mate, you said my stuff was better than your, you are SO wrong! This is great! Kind of makes me think of my dad...oooo Daddy's a gal! : P Love it, keep it up! Zo

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Amber Luce 09 April 2007

I love it. I can totally relate. I give this a 9.9...keep it up.

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Stephany Aa 09 April 2007

wow! i am sorprise about your poem, i feel the same.

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