Sunday, February 10, 2013

She Left Me....... [a Lost Love; Memories; Not Personal; Very, Very Short] Comments

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With my fondest thoughts of life I'll always link her.
She leaves me with my future, alone, to tinker.
My Love up and left! ......... That little stinker.
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Bri Edwards
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 27 March 2020

A short poem that speaks volumes. Also, the wording and the rhyme are delightful. Great poem!

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Danny Draper 19 February 2013

Succinct is good, just like this poem, poetic thoughts should be recorded regardless of the source of the inspiration. Short but sweet.

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Babatunde Aremu 14 February 2013

Nice poem. Well go ahead with your future which is precious. I like the poem.Kindly read my poems and comment

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