Wednesday, June 20, 2018

She Left Him Comments

Rating: 4.2

Flat line on the screen
No breath and beats
Only tears and screams
She left him forever
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 December 2022

She left him forever but gave lot of sweet momories to treasure forever....pathetic but unforgettable!

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Susheela Shiju 15 October 2018

few lines said it all! excellent!

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 July 2018

Oh! Very well presented, Rini. The line on screen is flat, showing that heart has stopped beating. She is no more. Left him forever... A death so common. But an uncommon poem. A poem to be treasured.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 July 2018

Death of a loved one, leaving behind sweet memories, inspiring to write an impressive poem in her memory.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 June 2018

When she met the death her lover or husband was on tears and screaming having lot of sweet memories of the past. A beautiful poem on life and death nicely shared.

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Kostas Lagos 21 June 2018

Death is more cruel for those who are left behind.Well written

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 June 2018

lovely poem sad and sweet glad they yeah did meet at least RJ ur creative thanks for reading me

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Lamar Cole 21 June 2018

Great poem about she left him.

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Robert Murray Smith 20 June 2018

Rini, this is the sadness that is seen in hospitals. Extremely well penned. Everything we need to know is in your few lines. That's poetry at its best. You have climbed the mountain.++10

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