Thursday, May 4, 2017

She Leaned On My Shoulder Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Sun bid farewell on western crimson sky
The birds returned to the nests with last song of the day
She too stood up and was about to leave
I held her hands and made a request
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KAVIN CHARALAN
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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 May 2017

Nice one.....10+++++++++++++

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Rajnish Manga 04 May 2017

This now goes into the list of my favourite poems. Thank you Kavin Charalan.

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Rajnish Manga 04 May 2017

So sweet and so romantic. The poem creates a perfect setting for the lovers to stay together: The Sun bid farewell on western crimson sky The birds returned to the nests with last song of the day

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