Hardly any man came by her way silently, and
being a perfect lady (with manners and all)
she smiled, and walked past the gentleman
seated in the cafe having capuccino,
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A great poem. I especially liked the line, 'she smiled to herself as she deliberated into his eyes' (I wish I had thought of that) . You have a nice way of writing, Louise - easy to read, easy to enjoy. Warmest regards and respect, CJ
Great poem. Rally establishes time and place so that the reader feels great empathy for the poet's rather sad situation, Gershon