Wednesday, December 14, 2005

She Knew A Good Man When She Saw One Comments

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Hardly any man came by her way silently, and
being a perfect lady (with manners and all)
she smiled, and walked past the gentleman
seated in the cafe having capuccino,
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Louise Marie DelSanto
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Gershon Hepner 18 December 2005

Great poem. Rally establishes time and place so that the reader feels great empathy for the poet's rather sad situation, Gershon

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Cj Heck 17 December 2005

A great poem. I especially liked the line, 'she smiled to herself as she deliberated into his eyes' (I wish I had thought of that) . You have a nice way of writing, Louise - easy to read, easy to enjoy. Warmest regards and respect, CJ

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