Thursday, March 14, 2019

She Kills Herself To Look Pretty Comments

Rating: 5.0

She's Versed in nimble Kittens, and a predator in pumps
but she stutters in stilettos, when men's eyes are drunk
Tender limbs atrophy, when pain crawls up her spine
Achilles would have fallen, but she smiles and says she's fine
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Kevin Patrick
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Egbebi Mariam 22 March 2019

So Narrative and didactic, Nice try

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2019

When pain crawls up her spine, she smiles with the fallen thoughts. She earns her nick name Canidae. She kills herself is so sad and this poem is very amazing and thought provoking. This is brilliantly penned.10

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 March 2019

Write comment. Impressive piece, Kevin. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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