Friday, March 6, 2009

She Just Left...But Not Gone Comments

Rating: 5.0

You were the first on the scene of Knights
third of the whole to melt into the night
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Pranab K Chakraborty 07 July 2010

Then watch it float like a kite… higher, higher, higher, then fades out of sight. In height poet has also put the readers mind to fly in an endless ocean of eternity. Brain takes rest from where no hurry to come back....higher.....higher.....higher... echoes the whole universe. Well painted spring is also on the canvass. We feel she just left but not gone. Actually no pain of parting infects from the whole. A pleasant wideness with a sweet fragrance blowing through the poem. Unique experience of reading to feel indeed. More you write and write you more..... Regards, 10++ pranab

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‘In our darkest hour your spirit will be an eternal light’ ~ Mon Escorte ~ My Escort [incidentally a poem of mine] Wonderful observation and deduction…are beaming like Nascent Sun to give us delight. Thanks for such commonly uncommon poetry 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Remembering her is our desire… and her boundless caring, we highlight, , , , we rememebr and cherish our sacred love... beautiful write i love it.... you may read mine'Si may go'

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Barry A. Lanier 06 March 2009

a wonderful penning of grief, hope, then acceptance a real world dilemna with all of us...one I addressed and overcame in my 'Just Enough Light' and 'Acceptance' and 'My Hero', , , , , thanks for sharing

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