Monday, May 2, 2011

She Is You Comments

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Who is she? She's that girl in the mirror staring back at you,
She's the one you've been hiding from.
Look at me I say. Do you see how beautiful I am,
I can hold my head up high, I no longer can hide from the hurt and pain. Look at me I say. I have goals to achieve,
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Yawni Walton
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 May 2011

Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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