I watched the children at play.
Their very essence of innocence.
They began to stare.
They were aware of my pressence.
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i like this peom, it has has you woundering and like the person it was the last line that was the topper.
I thought the last line was wonderful. Never doubt the impact of the last line. GW62
So far, this one is my favorite of all your poems! You really packed a punch into the last line, the way the best ones do. Good job Rayniece.