Monday, October 11, 2010

She Is That Sunshine....... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking on the beach, with a lazy style
she made it bend,
before i know, we covered that mile,
...'nd my heart was mend
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Mohit Dhawan
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Elizabeth Fletcher 11 October 2010

This poem is very sweet. Whoever you were thinking of when you wrote this, is very lucky to have someone as sweet as you! Most definitely a ten from me!

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