Wednesday, March 16, 2016

She Is Still Shy Comments

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Cool wind cool showers, yet it warms,
Ask her to come with the wine of rains,
Virgin clouds need your nudist charms.
Around me and her should be curtains.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 June 2018

A magnificent poem. It captures the beauty and attributes of clouds Elegantly crafted write.10

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Loke Kok Yee 27 March 2016

reading your poems I never regret for my satisfaction is always met you play with words as no other can that is why I am your admiring fan thank you sir

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Kelly Kurt 16 March 2016

Absolutely lovely! No other poet on this site has the way with words as you

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 March 2016

Recollect the day we met in the rains, You became a curtain on the watching sky, Join her in giving a few more stains. Naughty clouds! You know she is still shy. i smiled after reading your poem as usual. you are so romantic and sensual sometimes. i gave u a 10. tony

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