She Is My Sin....... Comments
The days I walk under the rain
I feel a shadow, following me too
the minute I turn around
there I see a girl dressed in blue
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wow...such a lovely piece you're so creative your imagination is so superb... you have words to create such a lovely poem with pictures of every verses so vivid... really a lovely piece...sends a great impact i love the picture here: 'the moment I bend to feel the petals I hear someone, whispering my name and I go awaken from my sleep... ' so nice...impressive 10++++++ Lovelots, Maia
Hey Sebastine..this piece of ya is reflective of many beautiful things in you! ..She must be lucky to have you beside her when she cries in pain....very touchy..Wow what a gothic ending girl leaving goth like footprints and imagiantion flying high making it change into petals.....
TINE.... how lucky girl she was...? wish one of the sin...... Dreams sometimes truly happen.... believe me... if that sin cross in your life....
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7/20/2025 7:50:37 PM # 1.0.0
the moment I bend to feel the petals I hear someone, whispering my name Rachel Ann Butler